Feedback: Improvements:
After finishing our first draft, we played our teaser trailer to multiple different audiences and asked numerous different questions such as what they liked and disliked about our website, trailer and poster in order to be able to improve our piece to the best ability.
One of the improvements was to add more ratings on the website, as well and making them fit the page better. I decided to take on this role, I added another rating and decided to re do the entire theme of them, changing from red to a glitch effect white text, in order to give a range and make it stand out more, rather then just the repetitive use of the glowing red.
I also took on the role of lowering the darkness on our trailer, as people deemed it to be slightly too bright. We agreed with this view and thought it would match our genre better if it was lowered, adding more tension and making the scenes appear creepier.
Firstly I used Google images to find an the same image of five stars as I had used previously .

After this I added a review using the text tool (I made the reviews shorter so they were easier to read and stood out more)

I then added a new layer of a 'grunge' background I found on Google images to add texture to the text.
I then played around with the colour balance to give the background an orangey tone.
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